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Who gives them the right
to turn my escape
into my prison?
My love into my hate.
Who gives them the right
to turn my passion
into my own personal hell?
I don't understand
how they could have so much power.
So, I'll sit back and watch
trying to comprehend
how I can be in their position
rather than my own.
Who are "they" you ask?
Well,
thats for you to decide...
©2008-2009 ~RIN12345678
:iconrin12345678:

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:icontear-stained:
Aw! I really like this, although it seems so sad =(

ily! :love:

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:iconrin12345678:
awww!! thanks! :D hehehe... :D :giggle: ily too sissy!!!!! :)

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"Dwight, you ignorant slut!" :fork:
:iconmcg0603:
yeah.. that's stunning.. i think i'll do a song out of it, if you allow to.. :) perhaps you may write some other verses?^^ i think that would fit for refrain:

"Who are "they" you ask?
Well,
thats for you to decide..."

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Greetings from Germany

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:iconrin12345678:
aww! i'd be honored! lol and idk if i can write more...my creativity is running low... lol ^^

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"Dwight, you ignorant slut!" :fork:
:iconthorntheporcupine:
You're so good at Poetry! Someone even asked your permission to make a song from it!! I'm so proud and happy for you!! :hug:
and the poem is just beautiful!! I love it so much! So much emotion!!
and you got your avatar on! YAY!

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I'M TALKING ABOUT PISS AND SH** AND YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT SOME JAPANESE SHOW I DON'T GIVE A F*** ABOUT!!

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:iconrin12345678:
aww!! thank u so much sissy! i wrote it awhile ago! :D i cant wait till tomorrow! and yay!

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"Dwight, you ignorant slut!" :fork:
:iconchristiangirl4444:
Oh my gosh! This is great (but makes me sad :( ) Anyway, happier thought. Ahhhh! You changed your avatar. I like :D. GOD bless. Did you just write this?

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~Brittney S. ><>
Psalm 138:7, Though I walk in the midst of trouble, You preserve my life; You strech out Your hand against the anger of my foes, with Your right hand You save me.
:iconrin12345678:
no i wrote it awhile bak and thanks for the fav! my avvy is shamis!! :) ahhh!!!!

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"Dwight, you ignorant slut!" :fork:
:iconchristiangirl4444:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

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~Brittney S. ><>
Psalm 138:7, Though I walk in the midst of trouble, You preserve my life; You strech out Your hand against the anger of my foes, with Your right hand You save me.

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